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I lived in a dream world.
With fluffy stars and bright clouds and the
Endless flowing of sleep and the brilliant
Sensation that i was falling.

Cheese moons, and suns with Gods in them and
Pink oceans and magenta skies and hummingbirds.
Honeysuckle that grew up and around my brain and the sweetness seeped in,
Forever staining me.

Reality didn’t kick in until your lips connected
With mine.
The world shifted, I’m sure i felt the Earth tremble slightly,
And i thought, “Why is the world turning over?”
I opened my eyes and saw the world for what it is.

It’s a gritty, dark grey snow globe all shaken up,
The ash people all fallen down, landing here, some good,
Some bad, some grey.
It’s human.
Its reality, and i’m finally awake.

And for sure, it aint no dream world…but i’m still happy
To be apart of it anyway.
©2009 ~Jasper09
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Please be kind if commenting, my fragile brain can't take criticism =p
(Seriously, it can't.)

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:iconspintherella:
=D wwwuuh ur such a good writer ^ , ^

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:aww::glomp: Thank you soo much Marthe!!:hug: I really appreciate that :tears:=p :XD::heart:
Your a really good writer as well! Your fanfics are awesome! :salute::D

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:aww: naw hehe
Well Im new on the FF side, but I guess Im doing ok! XD
But u should really submit some more writing stuff ^^
I will read it :blowkiss::hug: <33

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Your fanfics are awesome!
Keep up the good work!:thumbsup::XD:
I've got another one that i submitted not that long ago, it's not that good though ^^; [link]
Aww, thanks:hug::heart:
Have you got any writing requests? :D

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Thanks hon I will,
just submitted th rest of my Ichiruki doujinshi What is chirstmas ichigo ?
=D=D hehe

I saw and I left a comment!" It was GREAT !! ^^

:glomp: <3

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Oh, kewl, i'll check it out! :D :hug:
Aww:tears:Thank you so much, it means a lot ^^ :glomp::blowkiss::heart:

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hehe never a problem mah dear :glomp: :heart:
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